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05 Sep 2014

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LuckyDucky, 05 Sep 2014

-gasp- colored!

And ew, think about all the diseases and stuff, and the smell =/ Lucky is really brave here, just saying. 1.) It's a hallway and hallways are scary. 2.) it's dark and there's like 1 light 3.) there's bloood blood is never good 4.) but I guess dying with oliver isn't that bad of a way of leaving the world. Yes.
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>FAN<, 05 Sep 2014

slowly just one step after another... Okay if Oliver, OLIVER! is scared this must be the most freaking scrary hole ever D:
I am so terrified what is going to happen next... I can't even imagine :(

I think Lucky just want to abstract his mind of this blood and the atmosphere there.
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redleaveshavefallen, 05 Sep 2014

I absolutely adore the writing in this comic, I don't think I can say it enough. That last panel alone gives such a strong impact, it really does things to the reader. And by my definition, anything that communicates with and creates a reaction in the viewer is definitely a great piece of art.
Thanks again for your thrilling story!
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WarriorNun, 05 Sep 2014

I love the character development so far! You reveal so much about Oliver and Lucky!
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midnight_writer_shadow, 05 Sep 2014

Scared wouldn't begin to describe it. I understand how they both are. Makes me wish I could hug and protect both of them honestly. I just love the comic so much. It definitely gave it a more scary effect with it being colored this time. This is definitely where the creepy music would start playing. Keep up the excellent work!
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SundaeQuests, 05 Sep 2014

BWAHHHHHHHHHHH. Quiquiquiquiqui?!?!?!?!??!?!?!??!! MYEGUKU!!!!!!!!!!
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Onyxlight, 06 Sep 2014

Oliver's honesty is unnerving
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Guest, 06 Sep 2014

:o
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Merp. (Guest), 06 Sep 2014

If Oliver is scared shit just got serious.
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Goldscreen, 07 Sep 2014

Poor Oliver. I would shat myself if I had to go down that hallway. But I guess I would feel a bit better if I had someone with me. It was nice of Lucky to volunteer.
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A.W. (Guest), 08 Sep 2014

The way you do this comic is so... I don't know how to put it other than masterful... I've gotten seriously attached to these unique characters so when Oliver says that he's scared, instead of simply feeling nervous or awaiting the next page, I feel it myself to! Youve created this world and characters in such a way and displayed them in such a way that we really connect with them, we feel their fear, their anger, their loss and pain... And more than that you've made us love them, all of them, so that we want to protect them and help them. And that keeps us hooked, because we don't want anything bad to happen in this dark, dreary environment. So when you throw a tunnel full of blood at us and have two characters walk down it, we feel anxiety and fear. It's amazing... What you've done... Simply breathtaking.
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crosschyld, 08 Sep 2014

@A.W.: Wow, thank you so much for this! Characterization/character development is one of the main goals in this comic to me so for someone to analyze like this and tell me I'm doing a good job makes me feel so happy!! -RP
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